Week 4 Cybersmart Improving a comment

Today in cybersmart our goal was to change an okay blog comment and make it an outstanding one. We copied the comment and pasted it into a google drawing and started to change it. There were lots of options but I chose this one because I thought I could make it better. We looked back at our learning padlet from last week that was all about what makes a great blog comment and saw what people had and what they missed. This is the average comment and my comment above. I think this activity was helpful because now I know what is a good comment and an amazing comment and if I see a comment like this on my blog I can tell them how to make it better.
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What makes a great comment

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 Hi ,today in cyber smart we had to write a lot of ideas that makes a comment amazing.First we read some really good comments for an example and to get some inspiration.Next we watched 2 different video's to get some more ideas.We went back to our padlet to update and add more info about blog comments.Make sure you take a look at our padlet. Thanks for reading my post. Please leave a comment and make sure its positive ,thoughtful and helpful.