Week 4 Cybersmart Improving a comment

Today in cybersmart our goal was to change an okay blog comment and make it an outstanding one. We copied the comment and pasted it into a google drawing and started to change it. There were lots of options but I chose this one because I thought I could make it better. We looked back at our learning padlet from last week that was all about what makes a great blog comment and saw what people had and what they missed. This is the average comment and my comment above. I think this activity was helpful because now I know what is a good comment and an amazing comment and if I see a comment like this on my blog I can tell them how to make it better.
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What makes a great comment

Created with Padlet

 Hi ,today in cyber smart we had to write a lot of ideas that makes a comment amazing.First we read some really good comments for an example and to get some inspiration.Next we watched 2 different video's to get some more ideas.We went back to our padlet to update and add more info about blog comments.Make sure you take a look at our padlet. Thanks for reading my post. Please leave a comment and make sure its positive ,thoughtful and helpful.

Brain Box

Yesterday we got to play with an electricity Circuit with room 7 and 9.We had to build some circuits and try to make them work.My thing link shows my labelling and description about what they do.A circuit holds electricity in the battery and the connectors allow it to travel through to the light bulb.If the circuit is not complete it won't work.We made a lot more like this one except some of the others had a sound maker and a fan that could nearly fly to the roof ! Building circuits where really fun.I think I am relational because I got lot's of ideas and  I explained them really well.Hope you like it and comment.

Term 3 cybersmart

 Today in cybersmart we have been changing some of our posts to make it look better and so people who visit my blog will think that it's even more interesting.The blog post I changed is my week 7 one.James our cybersmart teacher shared with us a rubric that helped us on this activity by telling us if we have the stuff or if we could improve.We also rated our post on beginner,stepping up or smart learner.Take a look and please comment.                  

Learning and creating week 7.

Hi everyone,this is my second post .This is what I have been learning during week 7.In week 7 we did some writing,art,maths ,spelling and I have some information about Matariki .Be sure to comment!!!

My favourite thing in term 2

My favourite thing in term 2

My favourite thing this term was bible.Mrs Eden our bible teacher told us lots of story's. One of them was about Joseph and his 11 brothers and the activity was making coats like the one that Joseph owned.

Hi,this is my blog treaty. It talks about what my blog is for and what I will make sure to do before I post something. Have a read and please comment.